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February 07, 2005
battoh
It's a BAT-TOOOOOOOH!
When I was little my good friend and I used to get really bored and pretend that we were freestyle artists. It was fun, trying to come up with something right there, whatever is on your mind. It didn't always make sense, but it helped me learn how to use words more quickly.
Every once in a while, I would think of one so good I had to write it down. I love writing poetry or lyrics off the top of my head because I feel like, in a way, it's more true, more pure.
I'm not trying to say that I was actually GOOD at it or anything, but... there's really something special in my heart for poetry or lyrics that i've written off the top of my head without ever editing it
One such example of a poem that just flew from my fingers without stopping is this one:
Oh shit, fantacular as the MANtacular walks by/ I cry/ almost said bye bye / let him fly by/ but was sighed / a "don't try to lie or fake your high/ just settle down your little frown/ let me love ya as the sun goes own"/ obstruction of the construction that was created for a good fuck-tion/ let me show you the true love story/ the old allegory / of unconditional care/ multi-dimensional pair/ connection on a different level/ bevel/ wake up make up disheveled/ Extensional is the forensical musical lair/ that holds the truth and beginning of the rather untypical pair/ up the stair do dare explore the meaning of sparing care/ but it dont matter cuz the splatter that shattes/ the dreams of little babies occured like rabies/ wild and daring crazy like maybe/ I want to/ bite you/ fight you/ spite you/ fuck you / stuff you / love you/ kiss you/ hold you/ miss you.
Battoh gear.
What is the first thing that is flowing out of your mind? right now? Doesn't have to be poetry... =]
Posted by Kim at February 7, 2005 12:19 PM
Comments
i like your wallpaper. do you mind sending me that pic? thanks. 1lazysheep@gmail.com
Posted by: Toan at February 7, 2005 07:05 PM
since you inspired me, here's something i just did in 5 minutes: ^__^
things are not the same, life goes on.
just don't expect anything if it's already gone.
you can cheat me and leave me,
but now you can just straight out eat me.
please don't even bother, cuz I aint got the time
I'm getting sick of all that same ass lines.
just turn around and walk away
cause it's time for me enjoy a brand new day.
-peace out
Posted by: RaSenGan at February 7, 2005 11:20 PM
okay see I am from Scottsdale,Az and you guys down in Irvine drive slow. We never drive slow down here in Scottsdale. All I saw was just fixed up imports like the Nissan's, Hyundai's,Kia',etc. These fixed up and all modified imports are REALLY getting old now. Shit is pissing me off. I just love my 2005 V8 Chevy Truck. Man that son bitch is super fast.
Posted by: Rick Dees at February 8, 2005 06:46 AM
There once was a lady named Kim,
Whose hawtness near reached the brim,
But she's also so sweet,
Her website's so neat,
And I want to have her babies.
. . . >.
Posted by: Sid at February 8, 2005 10:49 AM
Ack, my post got cut off (probably because of that face I made XDDD ) What I said was:
I failed poetry class in high school. =/
Posted by: Sid at February 8, 2005 10:51 AM
do you know the song high fidelity by jurassic 5? your poem reminds me of that song. er rap. haha. don't worry it has no curse words and no references to body parts like the songs made by rappers today. that's the url of the lyrics if you decide to look into it.
http://www.allthelyrics.com/lyrics/jurassic_5/power_in_numbers/high_fidelity-180932-lyric/
Posted by: anon at March 11, 2005 03:14 PM